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The wind blew softly, a slight shiver went up my spine as the cool sea-breeze tickled the skin showing, I was wearing my favorite blue Backless shirt and blue skinny Jeans with my thread sandals. Then I stood up and jumped down from my rooms porch onto the sandy beach of northern Puerto Rico and walked slowly to the ocean.
As I reached the edge of the wash I stopped and looked up from the sand as water crept around my sandals. As I looked at the sunset, the light made a florescent orange tint on the clouds and bounced off the water as 10 foot waves crashed into themselves.
"Perfect for surfing," I muttered to myself. To bad I wasn't here to surf, There had been reports of abnormal earthquakes in this area and now it's deserted. I was the only sign of human life for miles, well except my partner, Ricardo Sanchez who walked out in his Hawaiian beach shirt and khaki shorts and joined me. He was authentic Puerto Rican. The accent, black hair, hell he even had the typical Puerto Rican muscular body.
"It's Beautiful, Isn't it?" he asked me in his thick Puerto Rican accent. "Good day to surf,"
"I said the same exact thing not a minute ago." I replied with a slight laugh.
"So, Mily, I was wondering," he said cautiously, "What exactly are we dealing with here?"
"There was a 9.8 in San Juan, A 10.2 in Ponce and a 3.0 in Mayaguez," I replied grimly.
"Glad we're in Isabela then eh?" He responded humorously.
" Yeah sure am, I just hope this isn't anything bad," I started when suddenly a 20 foot wave couldn't be farther out then 300 meters started getting bigger and the ground started to shake vigorously. "Oh crap," I said as I turned to him.
"We best be going now. I'll get the equipment, You get the truck started. We need to get to Rafael Hernandez Airport, I have a plane there," He said brusquely. "Quickly now, we don't have time to mess around!" He yelled. Racing back to the house, we blew in through the door and he went left to get the Equipment which was blaring in alarm. I took right and grabbed the truck keys and Baggage. Running through the front door I unlocked the truck, opened the drivers seat, and quickly placed our luggage on the backseat. Then I saw Ricardo running out the front door of the house. At the truck he quickly opened the back door, softly placing the equipment on the seat. Then slamming the door shut, he opened the passengers door and quickly jumped in, closing the door behind him.
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The wind blew softly, a slight shiver went up my spine as the cool sea-breeze tickled the skin showing, I was wearing my favorite blue Backless shirt and blue skinny Jeans with my thread sandals. Then I stood up and jumped down from my rooms porch onto the sandy beach of northern Puerto Rico and walked slowly to the ocean.
As I reached the edge of the wash I stopped and looked up from the sand as water crept around my sandals. As I looked at the sunset, the light made a florescent orange tint on the clouds and bounced off the water as 10 foot waves crashed into themselves.
"Perfect for surfing," I muttered to myself. To bad I wasn't here to surf, There had been reports of abnormal earthquakes in this area and now it's deserted. I was the only sign of human life for miles, well except my partner, Ricardo Sanchez who walked out in his Hawaiian beach shirt and khaki shorts and joined me. He was authentic Puerto Rican. The accent, black hair, hell he even had the typical Puerto Rican muscular body.
"It's Beautiful, Isn't it?" he asked me in his thick Puerto Rican accent. "Good day to surf,"
"I said the same exact thing not a minute ago." I replied with a slight laugh.
"So, Mily, I was wondering," he said cautiously, "What exactly are we dealing with here?"
"There was a 9.8 in San Juan, A 10.2 in Ponce and a 3.0 in Mayaguez," I replied grimly.
"Glad we're in Isabela then eh?" He responded humorously.
" Yeah sure am, I just hope this isn't anything bad," I started when suddenly a 20 foot wave couldn't be farther out then 300 meters started getting bigger and the ground started to shake vigorously. "Oh crap," I said as I turned to him.
"We best be going now. I'll get the equipment, You get the truck started. We need to get to Rafael Hernandez Airport, I have a plane there," He said brusquely. "Quickly now, we don't have time to mess around!" He yelled. Racing back to the house, we blew in through the door and he went left to get the Equipment which was blaring in alarm. I took right and grabbed the truck keys and Baggage. Running through the front door I unlocked the truck, opened the drivers seat, and quickly placed our luggage on the backseat. Then I saw Ricardo running out the front door of the house. At the truck he quickly opened the back door, softly placing the equipment on the seat. Then slamming the door shut, he opened the passengers door and quickly jumped in, closing the door behind him.
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Thank you to my cousin, Emma for helping me revise this part of the story.
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Ryelo Averden pages 4-8
"I'm not taking any of your Russian bullshit; I know your plans, take me in and test on me like an animal!" I snapped.
"I mean no harm little girl," The Russian Replied continuing to lower his weapon.
I closed her eyes for one second and heard the Russian take a step,
"Отступить! You dirty fucking Russians!" I yelled opening my eyes and raising the weapon to his head. "What's your name Russian?"
"Tell me yours first," The Russian replied.
"Adriana,"
"Ha! That was my sisters name you know."
"Should I give a shit?"
"Meh I guess not, what's your real name," The Russian asked, starrin
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"Ryelo?" Cib asked, looking up at me.
"Yes?"
"How much longer till we set up camp?"
"Not too long now okay little one?"
"Okay."
Okay you get it we talk we go around yadda, yadda. Moving on at about fifteen-hundred the next morning our clothes are tattered and we are drowsy and our feet are burning from walking all day.
As we walked past an old hut I piped up when I saw a shot up sign," Cib, look! We're almost there just 3 more miles it says."
"That's good, "Cib replied
"Hey Ry can we take a break?"
"Sure." As we walked into the old hut for some shade I heard a loud roaring noise from some contraption, and it was getting louder
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"Okay," Cibana replied enthusiastically.
As we reached the top of the hill I spotted a semi-small brown dot and stopped my sister.
"GET DOWN," I whispered urgently
As we crouched onto the ground I grabbed my daddy's military goggles and slowly crouched walked up to the top of the hill, and looked through the goggles. Searching for the brown dot I saw it but with the goggles I could see what it was.
"A bear, shit," I whispered to myself.
"What is it Ry?" my sister whispered in my ear.
"A bear, Black bear to be correct," I replied then grabbing my GPS I checked how far the next Town is.
"Severo-eniseyskiy is eight and a half mil
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My name is Ryelo Averden and this is my story. When I was a child, say 8 years of age my parents were brutally murdered in front of me. Me? I was left to die in the blistering-cold Siberian wilderness.
After my parents were killed, the assailants came up to me and grabbed me by my hair, picked me up, and threw me onto my old couch then proceeded to tell me that, "The only reason we are letting you live is to keep your parents legacy alive."
But none-the-less I found comfort in knowing that my father taught me everything I need to know in order to survive the bitter cold frozen landscape of northern Russia. Now known as American-Russia aft
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im just going to write the next part right now